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Original: 9/23/2008 4:08 AM
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Tuesday, September 23, 2008

 "Three quarks for muster Mark."

I spend most of my time looking down
at the ground.
Not out of humility but rather self importance.
But some nights, when it's late (or quite early) I look up
into the starry sky and wonder what it would be like
in some silent, simple life
as simple as this night and as silent.
Perhaps one day I might lay on some grassy knoll
beneath a romantic moon that speaks volumes
on silence and simpleness and
the company of all the stars and my own heart
would suffice.
Or perhaps, in some simple way I will find silence yet
in the center of the storm that brews in my heart:
the heart of the storm
the heart of my heart.
--me
this feels unfinished, as usual.
4:03AM, Tuesday, 23 September 08
On returning home from a night shift
BBC World Service: Discovery -- Quarks: Gellman from Joyce.
Eyes on the sky.

God's Peace

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It does seem unfinished.
Posted 9/24/2008 11:00 PM by Queen4112 - reply

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bhaijan! thanks for your comment. i didn't see this one before... lovely. :) i know exactly what you mean about the poem feeling unfinished... not that this one seems so, but that i often feel a loss of language partway through while writing. it becomes a tussle between writing for catharsis and forming something coherent, for me at least :)
Posted 12/18/2008 4:24 AM by starry_eyed_philosopher - reply


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