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Sunday, September 28, 2008

 The reality is.

I'd write down all my pomegranate dreams
but pomegranate seeds will drown a man
in decadence.

Simply fresh, lemon scented exuberance.
I make my case for lasting first impressions
and the effervescent last kiss
of temporary bliss.

Swallow your shade whole and un-
-aided by the slippery solution of sunshine
and rain.

Sometimes the darkness does dream
and maybe it's the split-level or the duplex
or simply the sheen of latex paint
that so confidently screens our blemishes
and our mistakes
so completely shades our misguided
misgiving about ourselves and the walls
that will tell our stories after us
Covers them in the completeness of
any great lie and waterproofs them
for God to find.

Then what of the day when you dream of
only shade but find no concoction of sunshine
and rain; only the sun, neither shine nor rain
and the pain of standing in the heat
our bodies each to each like sardines
packed in the saline of our own sweat.

What of the day when my tongue will speak
and my hands will say that I wrote these words
in vanity and greed. And my fingers scream
of the injustices that burdened them and my
mind will ask justice for my thoughts and
punishment for my dreams?
What of the moment when my eyes will
tell all they've seen?

Then I'll be asked about my pomegranate dreams
and my lemon scented exuberance and the
darkness of the concoction of my speech.

So, I'd write down all my pomegranate dreams
but pomegranate seeds will drown a man.
--me
8:40PM, Sunday, 28 Sep 08
After reading "Of Love and the Lack of It"
Last night with Sh Husain.

God's Peace
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Posted 10/4/2008 7:00 PM by Queen4112 - reply

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SubhanAllah. Did you write this and all your other posts that I get in my emails? MashaAllah bro you have serious skills, even if you are just FINDING these. If you are writing them, subhanALLAH. I read this one slow and twice, and it scared me and was a tear jerker at the same time. I am not even subscribed to many people of my original xanga anymore just because of lack of time of finding them all...but I am glad I am subscribed to your page dude. If I knew I was missing something like this with everyone else I would be subscribed to them right away. JazakAllah khair.
Posted 10/24/2008 8:34 PM by TheHonestFalcon - reply

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lovely... beautifully written.

i randomly clicked on your name after you commented on a medscape article and was touched by your most recent entry. thank you =)
Posted 10/29/2008 12:07 AM by starry_eyed_philosopher - reply

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oh my. there is so much going on in this piece. so many colors, fragrances, textures and just details. i love it. & i would have to say, with this, even your writing has a new kick to it. if i may say as much, it reminded me of a modern-day Rumi. and you have now inspired me to read "Of Love and the Lack of It".

I also thought it interesting that both of our most recent pieces mentioned judgement day. I guess growing has a lot to do with introspection and reflection on that particular day...

Posted 10/31/2008 5:03 PM by Dj_Raz - reply

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the pictures that you drew in my mind, were things i've never seen before. that's the best way i can put it. i love sensory detail..i used to write w/ a lot of it too, i loved every scent, feeling, every scene.
Posted 11/4/2008 10:23 PM by online now entranced99 - reply

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i see you are still writing, mA.
Posted 11/6/2008 6:34 PM by ThePakistinian - reply

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can you please write a book so i can buy it?
:)
Posted 11/15/2008 2:13 AM by Dj_Raz - reply


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