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Original: 2/24/2009 9:08 AM
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Tuesday, February 24, 2009

 

There's something special about the things we don't have...

Because this is real life and not the movies
we make choices but don't decide,
and find it impossible to overcome
the irreconsilable differences that divide.

Because this is hardly the beginning
and because the ending looms so near
we're caught in webs of apparition
hurt needling our tears.

Because this is real life and not the movies
all the endings are not neat
but manufactured moments
aren't nearly half as sweet.

Because this is hardly the beginning
and because the ending might be close
smile in each and every scene
and keep your heart aglow with hope.
--me
8:01PM, Tuesday, 24 Febraury 2009
For K.

God's Peace

 Posted 2/24/2009 9:08 AM - 83 Views - 10 eProps - 6 comments

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manufactured moments aren't nearly as sweet b/c they can't retain nearly as much bitterness either..
Posted 2/24/2009 11:53 PM by Dj_Raz - reply

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nice!  I really like it.  I wanna show my kids that as an example because we're starting a poetry unit soon but I don't think they'll get it and they'll probably complain about the big words, haha.
Posted 3/9/2009 11:32 PM by LaZiDeZi - reply

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It's a nice poem. Reminds me of the saying:
"“Good poetry ..
makes the universe ..
reveal its .. 'secret'” - Hafiz

peace.
Posted 3/21/2009 4:20 AM by maharani87 - reply

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i haven't read anything as simple but on point in a while.
Posted 3/22/2009 10:07 PM by online now entranced99 - reply

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thanks for giving me feed back. i miss that about xanga. i use it so rarely now, and so few of the people are left from back then, it's nice to have a critic, that i admire so much :)
Posted 4/9/2009 12:30 AM by online now entranced99 - reply

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Awesome poem.  It'd been a while since you'd posted anything.
Posted 4/22/2009 2:32 PM by Queen4112 - reply


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